Nice. I’m wondering about whether you have set up your focal point a bit too late in the photo. What would it hurt to make it more deliberate (maybe lengthen the distance your FP is designed to take us in from the first contact point in the photo to where you left it off originally. It makes it more comprehensible, possibly). The overall imagery is quite nice, however.
I probably do need to tinker a little bit. I’m shooting with an F stop of 11 now, and I’m doing focus stacking. But even at that, I’m getting soft spots.
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Nice. I’m wondering about whether you have set up your focal point a bit too late in the photo. What would it hurt to make it more deliberate (maybe lengthen the distance your FP is designed to take us in from the first contact point in the photo to where you left it off originally. It makes it more comprehensible, possibly). The overall imagery is quite nice, however.
I probably do need to tinker a little bit. I’m shooting with an F stop of 11 now, and I’m doing focus stacking. But even at that, I’m getting soft spots.